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PostSubject: Re: JLS Stories   Sun Oct 23, 2011 12:56 am

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PostSubject: Re: JLS Stories   Sun Oct 23, 2011 12:57 am

KIIIIIIRSTEN YOU THERE? xx
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PostSubject: Re: JLS Stories   Sun Oct 23, 2011 12:59 am

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PostSubject: Re: JLS Stories   Sun Oct 23, 2011 1:19 am

WOOOO! Lets post? <3
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PostSubject: Re: JLS Stories   Sun Oct 23, 2011 1:23 am

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PostSubject: Re: JLS Stories   Sun Oct 23, 2011 1:31 am

Repost...

Part Seven.
We walked for about 15 minutes in silence, except the occasional small talk.
"Is this it?" I asked him.
"Looks like it, considering it has a big sign saying 'SHOPPING CENTRE' across the front." Aston replied cheekily.
I hit him round the head.
"OUCH!" He groaned, rubbing his very sore head.
After walking in there we saw so many people. More than I've ever seen in a 'shopping centre' back home.
Aston nudged my arm, walking to the lift. I followed curiouslAston nudged my arm, walking to the lift. I followed curiously.
"Up or down?" He asked me once we were in.
"Excuse me?"
"...Up or down?" He repeated.
"Oh, you mean on the elevator."
"Lift." Aston corrected, I rolled my eyes.
"Erm...Up, up and away!" I laughed.
"Your laugh is adorable." Aston said pushing the up arrow.
The lift began going up before it suddenly had a small bounce up then down before stopping.
"Are we here?" I asked Aston.
"I think we're stuck." He replied. "It could take hours before they find us."

More?<3
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PostSubject: Re: JLS Stories   Sun Oct 23, 2011 1:33 am

More More More !Very Happy xxxx
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PostSubject: Re: JLS Stories   Sun Oct 23, 2011 1:35 am

and you:L♥
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PostSubject: Re: JLS Stories   Sun Oct 23, 2011 1:41 am

Okaay gonna write a bit more then post :')♥
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PostSubject: Re: JLS Stories   Sun Oct 23, 2011 1:42 am

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PostSubject: Re: JLS Stories   Sun Oct 23, 2011 1:44 am

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Part Six.
Meanwhile in Aston’s room…Aston was having some dinner sitting on the coach with it on his lap. He was watching T.V. as well but it wasn’t too loud when he heard some shouting like it was coming from the next room. He turned down the T.V. thinking what was happening in Joe and [Yourname]’s room. He listened carefully and stopped eating so the chewing wouldn’t over take the sound.
“No get off me!” he heard [Yourname] scream then a thud like something had fallen on the floor. He flew up from his seat to go round and find out what’s going on. He put his tray of food on the sofa and went round and hesitated before knocking on the door. He heard shuffling them silence. Joe had grabbed [yourname] off the floor as soon as he heard the door and put his hand over he mouth throwing her in the bathroom and locking the door so she couldn’t get out. Joe straightened his clothes before putting a smile on his face and opening their door to Aston stood there confused.
“Hello” Smiled Joe.
“Erh hi I was just wondering is everything okay? I heard shouting and noises?” Aston asked.
“Yes everythings fine” Joe answered.
“You sure cause im sure I heard…” Aston started.
“You heard nothing!” Joe shouted which startled Aston.
“Alright mate I was only asking!” Aston sighed before hearing [Yourname] knocking on the bathroom door.
“Aston!” [Yourname] shouted.
“Was that [Yourname]?” Aston asked looking inside confused.
“No [Yourname]s asleep!” Joe answered going to close the door.
“Aston help me!” [Yourname] cried putting her head against the door as she thought there was no hope in him hearing her.
“Alright but if I find out anything…” Aston warned as Joe nodded smirking as Aston left,Joe slammed the door and got [yourname] out of the bathroom and beat her until she was bruised.
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PostSubject: Re: JLS Stories   Sun Oct 23, 2011 1:51 am

New Part.

Part Seven.
In the morning [Yourname] woke up on the sofa and hurt from head to toe, bruises covering her. She cried as she tried to move off the sofa but it hurt. She winced as she walked up the stairs and got changed into some new clothes ready for a day faking her ‘love’ for Joe.
“Morning babe” Joe smirked kissing her as she sighed when he pulled away and walked down the stairs. She was wearing a hooide and jeans so none of the bruises shew on her and no one would be suspicious. Today she was out with the JLS boys and Joe had work so luckily she wouldn’t had to fake so much.
“[Yourname] come down here a minute babe!” She heard Joe shout so she limped down the stairs and into the kitchen where Joe was eating breakfast.
“Yeah?” she whispered looking at him.
“We are getting married, put that on” he said not taking no interest in her at all but throwing a ring for her to catch,she caught it and she had a shocked face.
“What? I don’t want too…” she trailed but Joe looked up at her and gave her a harsh look.
“Fine” she sighed nodding putting the ring on her finger, to be quite honest the ring was nice but how romantic practically telling her they are getting married! She didn’t want to marry him, he treats her like shit but she had too, what has she got herself into?
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PostSubject: Re: JLS Stories   Sun Oct 23, 2011 2:00 am

awwwww bum! more please Luce.
I'll be posting more tonight.
when im in the posting zoooone.♥
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PostSubject: Re: JLS Stories   Sun Oct 23, 2011 2:04 am

Okaay!:L Cant Wait. Love Your Story and You! <3
Im in a posting zone so expect quite a bit from me :L <3
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PostSubject: Re: JLS Stories   Sun Oct 23, 2011 2:05 am

Part Eight.
[Yourname] finished getting ready for hurrying out the door so she wouldn’t be late. Aston was just then walking out his door as well.
“Morning Aston!” [Yourname] whispered walking closer to him,he looked up and smiled.
“Morning babe, you alright?” Aston asked her as she nodded looking down.
“How are you?” she asked this time looking at him and plastering a fake smile.
“Im good… were you okay last night? I heard shouting and noises?”
“Yeah I was asleep most of the time” She answered him as he nodded but not looking too convinced.
“Lets go meet the others” Aston smiled pulling [yourname] close to him as he could see she wasn’t really feeling up to anything today.
“Yeah” she answered as we went down the lift to downstairs.Marvin,JB and Oritse were standing out the front of the flat blocks waiting for them as we approached them they smiled and walked over.
“Morning guys” Oritse smiled hugging [Yourname] and man hugging Aston. They hugged the others before they all put their hoods up and walked around London looking for something to do on this cold day, luckily the weather wasn’t too nice so [Yourname] could cover up her bruises and not look suspicious about it. She loved spending time with the JLS boys because they made her laugh unlike Joe who was always rough with her when they were alone together.
“Is it me or has the temperature all of a sudden dropped!” [Yourname] spoke as her breath turned into steam as they all nodded pulling the collar of their coats over their faces. [Yourname] pulled her scarf over her face and her sleeves over her hands so she wouldn’t get cold.
“Its freezing!” Marvin exclaimed digging his hands into his jean pockets.
“Its getting dark!” JB said as everyone looked up at the sky where the clouds had covered the sun and it was now going down as the moon appeared.

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PostSubject: Re: JLS Stories   Sun Oct 23, 2011 2:05 am

YAY. -parties-
I love when you write♥♥♥
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PostSubject: Re: JLS Stories   Sun Oct 23, 2011 2:07 am

more please LucyLu♥
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PostSubject: Re: JLS Stories   Sun Oct 23, 2011 2:23 am

Part Eight.
It was pitch black in the sky now and the moon was out and it was huge! Their was twinkling stars in the sky and it was beautiful.
“Lets go to the place we recorded Take a chance on me” Oritse suggested.
“Yeah it looks amazing at night” JB smiled as they all headed there, [yourname] hadn’t been to that part of London before and was excited to see it. They soon arrived after quite a walk and looked over the balcony part at the water which the moon was reflecting on.
“Woah” [Yourname] whispered looking at it smiling.
“Told ya” JB smirked as [Yourname] giggled looking sidewards to look at him when she noticed Aston staring at her, she smiled at him and he winked at her as she looked back at the water smiling to herself while blushing a tad.
“Why is the moon so big?” Marvin chuckled.
“Don’t ask me I aint Enstine” Aston laughed and so did everyone else. [Yourname] stood on her tip toes and leant over the bar to look closer down as she wasn’t too tall.
“[Yourname] don’t do that you are gonna fall!” Marvin told her.
“Marvin im 22 not 2 let off” She giggled as he rolled his eyes.
“lets just hope you are a good swimmer!” Oritse laughed picking her up and pretending to throw her in.
“Reesh no!” she screamed as they all laughed as he pulled her back and put her down on the floor.
“That’s not funny” she giggled hitting his arm as they continued to laugh. She sighed as she felt something wet on her hand, she lifting her hand up and saw something white land on her hand…snow!
“Oh my god its snowing!” [Yourname] squealed as the boys looked up and saw small snowflakes falling from the black sky and they smiled. [Yourname] saw her ring on her finger and sighed, she didn’t want this, she sighed once more before looking at JLS who were looking at her worried, what if they saw the ring?
“You okay [yourname]?” Marvin asked.
“Yeah im fine” She answered smiling as they nodded.

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PostSubject: Re: JLS Stories   Sun Oct 23, 2011 2:35 am

OMG. MORE. MORE. MORE.
let it snow let it snow let it snoooow.
Didn't it hurt [yourname] when Reesh picked her up? because of her bruises?♥
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PostSubject: Re: JLS Stories   Sun Oct 23, 2011 2:40 am

Awwh thank you! Love when you write too Very Happy <3
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PostSubject: Re: JLS Stories   Sun Oct 23, 2011 2:42 am

New part.

Part Nine.
They were all messing around in the snow and throwing snow balls at each other.
“Its freezing!”[Yourname] screamed as Aston threw a snow ball at her and it went down her top.
“You idiot!” she squealed as she tried to shake it out but they laughed at her.
“[Yourname] duck!” Marvin shouted as Oritse threw one but she dodged it and it hit a couple that was stood at the balcony,arms wrapped around each other.
“Reesh man!” Marvin laughed, the couple turned to look at us as we put on innocent faces.
“Sorry they are really childish and were playing with snow balls I tried to stop them but they are uncontrollable, carry on, carry on” [Yourname] told them.
“Cheeky!” Aston gasped picking her up over his shoulder.
“Ast put me down!” [Yourname] shouted.
“no!” He exclaimed as she sighed and let him carry her. A few minutes later and Aston finally put her down.
“Thank you!” she laughed.
“No problem babe” He chuckled as she went to walk away.
“OH by the way [yourname]!” Aston shouted as she turned around.
“You have a nice bum” he grinned cheekily as she rolled her eyes and flicked his head before carrying on but grinning to herself secretly.
“Aston that’s my sister!” She heard Marvin moan as she giggled.
“Well im sorry mate, only speak the truth god.” Aston laughed as Marvin hit him round the head lightly. It started snowing heavier as [Yourname] twirled around in it with her arms open while the boys watched her.
“What are you doing?” JB asked her finally.
“ I don’t know people in movies do it when it snows but for me it doesn’t have the effect” she shrugged stopping while they laughed rolling their eyes. [Yourname] went and leant on the balcony again and watched the boats going past in the water with their lights on. In the distant she saw a couple on a boat and the man was down on his knee holding a box which she presumed was a ring as the girl had her hands over her mouth, she wished her proposal was like that and not how it was done this morning.
“What you thinking?” She heard Aston ask next to her.
“Nothing” she sighed laughing a little while taking her eyes off the couple and towards the water below her.
“I can tell, whats up [Yourname]?” Aston asked looking at her as she looked back at him.
“I said no-“ She started before she realized Aston’s eyebrow raised and looking towards her hand…her ring. She went to pull her hand away but Aston held it.
“[Yourname] whats this?” he asked her.
“Umm..” she started.
“Whats what?” Marvin piped up walking over.
“This!” Aston said pointing to her finger with the ring on.
“[Yourname]?” Marvin asked her.
“Well what does it look like?” she asked.
“Are you getting married to Joe?” Marvin asked her as she died inside hearing that but nodded….
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PostSubject: Re: JLS Stories   Sun Oct 23, 2011 2:42 am

Sugar! Yes lets pretend that i put that is hurt.....:L xxxxxx
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PostSubject: Re: JLS Stories   Sun Oct 23, 2011 2:44 am

awwww no:L.
more please LucyLu♥
I'll post lots for you tonight:D
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PostSubject: Re: JLS Stories   Sun Oct 23, 2011 2:45 am

I meant them not we in that part!:L xxx
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PostSubject: Re: JLS Stories   Sun Oct 23, 2011 3:00 am

Part Ten.
“[Yourname] why?” Marvin asked spinning her round by her shoulder which hurt and she winced a bit.
“Are you alright?” Aston asked.
“Fine” she sighed as one of her bruises throbbed.
“You look like you are in pain, whats wrong?” Oritse said coming over.
“Nothing im fine!” [Yourname] told them panicking.
“Is that a bruise!?” JB asked as her sleeve was raised and shew one.
“That is, what did you do?” Oritse said.
“Has Joe done that to you!” Marvin asked getting angry.
“Stop with all the questions!” [Yourname] snapped.
“[Yourname] are you okay? You’ve gone pale” Aston said ignoring her comment, she was confused and needed space so she just pushed through them all and walked the way they came away from them. She didn’t need all the questions,she was just as confused herself!
“[Yourname]!” Marvin shouted after her but she ignored them and carried on, she started to feel a little faint so held onto the railing of the balcony to keep steady but her head went dizzy,she heard footsteps behind her knowing it was the boys so walked on faster. All of a sudden her body gave in and she fell to the ground, everything went black. The boys rushed over to her and knelt down beside her.
“[Yourname]?” Marvin asked panicking.
“[Yourname]!” Aston shouted trying to wake her up.
“I think shes fainted!” Oritse told them as they looked at each other with panic written on their faces.
“Call an ambulance!” JB said just as [Yourname] opened her eyes blinking a few times.
“[Yourname] you okay?”Marvin asked as she held her head, it was hurting and she felt faint and dizzy.
“What What happened?” [Yourname] stuttered.
“You fainted but for a only a minute or so” Aston told her.
“Really? I don’t feel so good” she sighed as they helped her off the floor.
“Come on come back to mine and Rochelle’s, I’m not having you near Joe, I don’t know what he has done to you but it doesn’t seem safe!” Marvin told [Yourname] frowning.
“No! I cant, I mean no I’ll been fine there, Joe will look after me” [Yourname] quickly said knowing Joe would be angry with her if she didn’t go home.
“I am not letting you near him!” Marvin shouted.
“Marv calm down, she doesn’t need this right now!” JB told him as he nodded.
“Sorry [yourname]” He said.
“[Yourname] can come back to mine, I’m on my own anyway, you’ve got Rochelle” Aston smiled to Marvin as [Yourname] leant against him.
“You sure?” Marvin asked.
“Mhm” Aston smiled as he nodded.
“Thanks Ast!” [Yourname] whispered but worried what Joe was gonna be like.

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